He waved goodbye to his wife, then rushed up the stairs to his daughter’s room.
“OK, she’s gone shopping,” he said, and handed her $20. “Gimme the box.”
She crossed her arms. “No. I’m taking a HUGE risk hiding that. I want 40.”
“What ‘risk’? You’re sixteen, everyone expects you to have stuff like that.”
“Uh, NO! They DON’T! If someone found THAT, in MY room, I would DIE!”
He sighed. Teenagers.
Now alone in his study, and $40 lighter, he opened the box. Looking at its contents, he felt a twinge of guilt. What would his wife say if she saw this? He also became aware of his toy soldier collection. The soldiers were all muscular brutes with big guns, standing there in their display case, watching him, judging him… “Shut up,” he muttered.
He grabbed one of the DVDs from the box. He had time for two episodes, maybe three. The theme song started to play, and he felt his heart beat faster. The song propelled him into an enchanting world, a world he’d fallen in love with from day one.
“My Little Pony, My Little Pony
Ahh, ahh, ahh, ahhh…”
Thanks for reading!
Written for theΒ Sunday Photo Fiction β September 11thΒ 2016
193 words.
Great twist at the end, Sonny. Different people like different things. My daughter used to collect My Little Ponies. Really cute and funny. “D — Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne, glad you liked the twist. π The 2010-version of My Little Pony has left a lot of grown men confused, I think. π I grew up thinking MLP was “for girls”. And maybe the original MLP was especially appealing to girls, I don’t know. But the version from 2010 definetly appeals to a HUGE audience of boys, girls, men, women. It’s amazing. I love it, but I still find it difficult to talk about it with people in real life. It feels a bit embarrassing, being a 37-year old man and liking MLP. I know I shouldn’t feel that way, but… easier said than done.
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I just read one story that was very moving and tearful. This one, straight after, lifted my spirits and made me laugh. Well done.
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Thank you! I’m thrilled that my writing made you feel all that, thanks for letting me know, it’s a huge compliment. And I’m glad you happened to read them in that order so you ended on a positive note. π
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Very amusing. π I was not expecting that!
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Thank you Louise! I’m glad you liked it, it was so much fun to write, especially the plot twist. π
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A brony! Well played.
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Thanks! Yup, I expect he’ll be coming out of the brony closet eventually, but right now he’s a little shy. π (Edit: though he has confided in his daughter at least, that’s something!)
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Haha. That’s so funny!
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Thanks Amanda! I’m glad you liked it, I had a lot of fun writing it. π
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Wasn’t expecting that ending. Funny.
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Thank you! π
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You’re welcomr
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Very funny story. Well done.
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Thanks Iain, much appreciated! π
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LOL! I was waiting for the twist, but I thought it was Disney princess movies. My Little Pony is a much better twist!
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Hehe, thanks Jade! Glad I could surprise you at least a little. π I had a lot of fun writing this. MLP came naturally to me because, well, I like it a lot.. *^_^*
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