As a demolition expert, Bob knew very well what the implosion should sound like, and that was not it. The dust settled, and sure enough, half the building was still there.
He ripped off his earmuffs and walked towards the site. His crew made some pathetic attempts to stop him. As if it mattered whether he lived or died. He pushed them aside. Nothing mattered anymore, not since he lost his wife, Sarah.
Bob checked the first explosive charge. It seemed fine. He checked the rest, and they were also fine. What was going on?
As he stood there, scratching his head, he heard a baby cry. He felt his heart rate go through the roof. The bastards told him they’d checked for squatters!
He ran around like a madman looking for the baby. He found it in the arms of a woman. The mother? She was alive but unconscious.
“Hurry,” said a familiar voice in his head. Sarah? Was he going crazy? “I can’t stop it,” it said. “Hurry!”
Bob grabbed woman and child and ran. Just as they reached a safe distance he heard the voice again. “Take care of them, my love.” Then the charges exploded.
Thanks for reading!
Written for the Sunday Photo Fiction – October 2nd 2016
199 words.
What a great reminder that those gone on are no really gone…. Loved it! Well done.
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Awesome! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 Thank you!
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This felt so good to read.. Glad it ended with goodness. 🙂
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Thank you very much for the kind words, I appreciate it! 🙂
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Just beautiful, Sonny. I believe in miracles. Sometimes we just don’t recognize them for what they are. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne! About not recognizing miracles, yeah, that’s me in real life unfortunately. *^_^* I wouldn’t recognize a miracle if it hit me on the head, I’m just too rooted in the mundane. Thankfully I can break free in my writing, at least. 🙂
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Wow. That brought a tear to my eye. Love from beyond the grave and an angel looking out for people. An incredibly good write.
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😀 I’m so happy that the story moved you like that. I can think of no higher praise, thank you!
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Oh my god I had shivers reading this because it was that good. Ghostly twist! Great job Sonny.
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That means a great deal to me, thank you Jade! 😀
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